Tuesday, July 14, 2009

breakfast outside --
the wind wants
the feuilleton

(haiku/senryû -- or? ... however ...)


RBroeker said...

Well, if I were the wind, I'd taken the whole thing: I love newspapers. But I must admit that nature seems to be a sort of a "bel-sprit". Very nice senryu, Angelika.

Best wishes

Gillena Cox said...

nice one
i had to google 'feuilleton'

much love

Devika said...

First to this blog...

Nice set here, Angelika
and this feuilleton..is a new word to me too :)


Semaphore said...

Breakfast as a metaphor for the wind devouring things - beautifully expressive!

Ričardas said...

The day starts with a senryu-shelf, the day starts with a smile :)

haiku-shelf said...

Thank you so much, Gillena, Devika, Ralf, Sam and Ricardas!

Best wishes,

Rudi Pfaller said...

"feuille" (in French) means leave. Maybe the ku would better be published in autaumn. Will you think about it? Oh, I see, for me it's a haiku, not a senryu.

Best wishes